再一次声明:因为是一边作创一边打字,所以文中较多错别字,先谢谢大大们的抓虫,再有就是一构思好就打字难免病句残存,还请望各狼友海涵。原创小说真的不容易呀,写得好累好累,欢迎各狼友回复建议,或者本站PM给我,我一上色城就会尽快回复,谢谢。再次向那些站在一线的原创大大们致敬。
如果你觉得这部《校园》不错,请多多红心支持一下,让我有更多发原创小说的动力。
[ 本帖最后由 cwm78 于 2009-2-23 19:30 编辑 ]
[ 本帖最后由 沐海听风 于 2010-7-24 04:58 编辑 ]作者: jay9191991 时间: 2024-5-25 06:51
捉虫:
豪型椒乳(椒型豪乳)上印着很小块的乳晕
两双豪(乳)压在结实的大腿上
小浪蹄也是被这种麻麻苏苏(酥酥)的操B感给爽死了
看着自己起立的大吊(屌)
刚一开门就看到二对长得一模一样的美少女,两发(女)的服装款式都一样
看着徐徐起立的肉棒,干脆脱掉綀缚(束缚)的裤子作者: stp32 时间: 2024-5-25 06:52
再给楼主捉几个小虫子
1美女含鸡巴也能给耗尽身(体)能的身体 是体能
2小星和小风是侧是面向床而躺倒 多了个是,应该是侧面吧
3粉色的阴唇早已兴备(奋)向两边畅(敞)开 应该是兴奋和敞开吧
4让大一的其他蓝球队员观望唏虚(嘘)不已 是唏嘘
5任天乐讨教卸(御)女秘笈 御女不是卸女作者: tornit 时间: 2024-5-25 06:52
If you are looking for Novel with high Chinese literacy, you will feel a bit disappointed as this novel is filled with countless foul language and slangs.
But if you are interested in reading novels in which you expect to read course sex actions and extreme sex exposure, this novel will definitely satisfy your desire.
The topic of this story is very well named. "The Wanton School Life" (Translated by me) immediately tells the readers what they expect to read - there will be lots of undisciplined students revolting the school's rules and regulations and undergoing series of sex activities.
The writer is very rich in imagination and innovation. It seems he likes especially the opposite sex with big and full breasts. More or less every girl in the school is gifted with such physical feature which has driven the writer mad. Yet we must appreciate the writer's high technique and rich vocabularies in describing the breasts - the sizes and colour of the breasts, the colour,sizes and shapes of the nipples, the visibility of the veins along the breasts due to the whiteness of skin of the breasts, the resting posture of the nipples before being carassed and the jerking out after being carassed. Such a detailed description of the size, beauty and colour of the breasts and nipples is very rarely seen in the other adult novels. Most of them simply say the female sex has large and full moon breasts and nipples and that is all. Unlike the other novelists , the writer of this story has succeeded to lead all the readers into an extremely sexual arousing and imaginative world of wonderful breasts with big nipples.
Just because it is unreal in the actual world daily, the readers will find satisfactions to enjoy these pretty breasts as happy as the writer. For this point, the writer deserves to get a distinction.
The writer, however, cannot escape from the general format of exposing his hero as a superman in sex, handsome and strong and surrounded by lots of sexy and young school mates. Luckily he makes himself different from the other novelists in giving another detailed description of love making. These include the descriptions of the sex organs of both sexes and the physical reations and responses when the boy has entered the girl's body. Such a detailed presenting has given the readers a very high sex fire burning and burning. This is the type of writing that attracts the readers to indulge in reading this story.
The story is full of foul language and slangs. But as the writer has explained, today's students in high schools are not as tame and pure as we were years ago. But what has surprised me is even all the girls use more or less the same type of foul languages and slangs, thus making the whole story reads like a roaring and course mad mad sex world.
This novel is highly recommened due to such down to earth presentation of adult materials.作者: TianGouDaYe 时间: 2024-5-25 06:53
刚开始看,捉几个虫子
1 一场篮球好像不是90分钟啊,按四节,一节12分钟啊
2 “还有我余的体力在美女身上耕作呀,”是多余的体力
3 “被门铃所打断频为不爽。”是颇为不爽
4 “缅甸且脸红”是腼腆
5 害羞所至,是害羞所致
6 后面还有腼腆写成缅甸的,颇写成频的
[ 本帖最后由 天狗大爷 于 2012-1-9 14:33 编辑 ]作者: cospa 时间: 2024-5-25 06:54
捉两只虫
名版——名牌
蓝球——篮球
妙语呻(吟)
[ 本帖最后由 cospa 于 2012-2-21 16:21 编辑 ]作者: jiazaizhong123 时间: 2024-5-25 06:55
脏话连篇啊 应该多点其他的话 或多点情节作者: jay9191991 时间: 2024-5-25 06:55
情节不错,值得欣赏【校园浪荡记】[02-23 更新二章 第3章、第4章](连载作品)
作者:cwm81(小伟)「注:SISID是cwm78」
2009年02月23日同步首发SIS、性吧论坛。
再一次声明:因为是一边作创一边打字,所以文中较多错别字,先谢谢大大们的抓虫,再有就是一构思好就打字难免病句残存,还请望各狼友海涵。原创小说真的不容易呀,写得好累好累,欢迎各狼友回复建议,或者本站PM给我,我一上色城就会尽快回复,谢谢。再次向那些站在一线的原创大大们致敬。
如果你觉得这部《校园》不错,请多多红心支持一下,让我有更多发原创小说的动力。
[ 本帖最后由 cwm78 于 2009-2-23 19:30 编辑 ]
[ 本帖最后由 沐海听风 于 2010-7-24 04:58 编辑 ]作者: stp32 时间: 2024-5-25 06:56
捉虫:
豪型椒乳(椒型豪乳)上印着很小块的乳晕
两双豪(乳)压在结实的大腿上
小浪蹄也是被这种麻麻苏苏(酥酥)的操B感给爽死了
看着自己起立的大吊(屌)
刚一开门就看到二对长得一模一样的美少女,两发(女)的服装款式都一样
看着徐徐起立的肉棒,干脆脱掉綀缚(束缚)的裤子作者: tornit 时间: 2024-5-25 06:57
再给楼主捉几个小虫子
1美女含鸡巴也能给耗尽身(体)能的身体 是体能
2小星和小风是侧是面向床而躺倒 多了个是,应该是侧面吧
3粉色的阴唇早已兴备(奋)向两边畅(敞)开 应该是兴奋和敞开吧
4让大一的其他蓝球队员观望唏虚(嘘)不已 是唏嘘
5任天乐讨教卸(御)女秘笈 御女不是卸女作者: TianGouDaYe 时间: 2024-5-25 06:58
If you are looking for Novel with high Chinese literacy, you will feel a bit disappointed as this novel is filled with countless foul language and slangs.
But if you are interested in reading novels in which you expect to read course sex actions and extreme sex exposure, this novel will definitely satisfy your desire.
The topic of this story is very well named. "The Wanton School Life" (Translated by me) immediately tells the readers what they expect to read - there will be lots of undisciplined students revolting the school's rules and regulations and undergoing series of sex activities.
The writer is very rich in imagination and innovation. It seems he likes especially the opposite sex with big and full breasts. More or less every girl in the school is gifted with such physical feature which has driven the writer mad. Yet we must appreciate the writer's high technique and rich vocabularies in describing the breasts - the sizes and colour of the breasts, the colour,sizes and shapes of the nipples, the visibility of the veins along the breasts due to the whiteness of skin of the breasts, the resting posture of the nipples before being carassed and the jerking out after being carassed. Such a detailed description of the size, beauty and colour of the breasts and nipples is very rarely seen in the other adult novels. Most of them simply say the female sex has large and full moon breasts and nipples and that is all. Unlike the other novelists , the writer of this story has succeeded to lead all the readers into an extremely sexual arousing and imaginative world of wonderful breasts with big nipples.
Just because it is unreal in the actual world daily, the readers will find satisfactions to enjoy these pretty breasts as happy as the writer. For this point, the writer deserves to get a distinction.
The writer, however, cannot escape from the general format of exposing his hero as a superman in sex, handsome and strong and surrounded by lots of sexy and young school mates. Luckily he makes himself different from the other novelists in giving another detailed description of love making. These include the descriptions of the sex organs of both sexes and the physical reations and responses when the boy has entered the girl's body. Such a detailed presenting has given the readers a very high sex fire burning and burning. This is the type of writing that attracts the readers to indulge in reading this story.
The story is full of foul language and slangs. But as the writer has explained, today's students in high schools are not as tame and pure as we were years ago. But what has surprised me is even all the girls use more or less the same type of foul languages and slangs, thus making the whole story reads like a roaring and course mad mad sex world.
This novel is highly recommened due to such down to earth presentation of adult materials.作者: cospa 时间: 2024-5-25 06:58
刚开始看,捉几个虫子
1 一场篮球好像不是90分钟啊,按四节,一节12分钟啊
2 “还有我余的体力在美女身上耕作呀,”是多余的体力
3 “被门铃所打断频为不爽。”是颇为不爽
4 “缅甸且脸红”是腼腆
5 害羞所至,是害羞所致
6 后面还有腼腆写成缅甸的,颇写成频的
[ 本帖最后由 天狗大爷 于 2012-1-9 14:33 编辑 ]作者: jiazaizhong123 时间: 2024-5-25 06:59
捉两只虫
名版——名牌
蓝球——篮球
妙语呻(吟)
[ 本帖最后由 cospa 于 2012-2-21 16:21 编辑 ]作者: 944438044 时间: 2024-5-25 07:00
脏话连篇啊 应该多点其他的话 或多点情节作者: TianGouDaYe 时间: 2024-5-25 07:01
情节不错,值得欣赏