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【校园浪荡记】[02-23 更新二章 第3章、第4章](连载作品)【沐沐整理】

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发表于 2024-5-25 06:58:01 | 只看该作者
If you are looking for Novel with high Chinese literacy, you will feel a bit disappointed as this novel is filled with countless foul language and slangs.
But if you are interested in reading novels in which you expect to read course sex actions and extreme sex exposure, this novel will definitely satisfy your desire.
The topic of this story is very well named. "The Wanton School Life" (Translated by me) immediately tells the readers what they expect to read - there will be lots of undisciplined students revolting the school's rules and regulations and undergoing series of sex activities.
The writer is very rich in imagination and innovation. It seems he likes especially the opposite sex with big and full breasts. More or less every girl in the school is gifted with such physical feature which has driven the writer mad. Yet we must appreciate the writer's high technique and rich vocabularies in describing the breasts - the sizes and colour of the breasts, the colour,sizes and shapes of the nipples, the visibility of the veins along the breasts due to the whiteness of skin of the breasts, the resting posture of the nipples before being carassed and the jerking out after being carassed. Such a detailed description of the size, beauty and colour of the breasts and nipples is very rarely seen in the other adult novels. Most of them simply say the female sex has large and full moon breasts and nipples and that is all. Unlike the other novelists , the writer of this story has succeeded to lead all the readers into an extremely sexual arousing and imaginative world of wonderful breasts with big nipples.

Just because it is unreal in the actual world daily, the readers will find satisfactions to enjoy these pretty breasts as happy as the writer. For this point, the writer deserves to get a distinction.
The writer, however, cannot escape from the general format of exposing his hero as a superman in sex, handsome and strong and surrounded by lots of sexy and young school mates. Luckily he makes himself different from the other novelists in giving another detailed description of love making. These include the descriptions of the sex organs of both sexes and the physical reations and responses when the boy has entered the girl's body. Such a detailed presenting has given the readers a very high sex fire burning and burning. This is the type of writing that attracts the readers to indulge in reading this story.
The story is full of foul language and slangs. But as the writer has explained, today's students in high schools are not as tame and pure as we were years ago. But what has surprised me is even all the girls use more or less the same type of foul languages and slangs, thus making the whole  story reads like a roaring and course mad mad sex world.
This novel is highly recommened due to such down to earth presentation of adult materials.
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发表于 2024-5-25 06:58:47 | 只看该作者
刚开始看,捉几个虫子
1 一场篮球好像不是90分钟啊,按四节,一节12分钟啊
2 “还有我余的体力在美女身上耕作呀,”是多余的体力
3 “被门铃所打断频为不爽。”是颇为不爽
4 “缅甸且脸红”是腼腆
5 害羞所至,是害羞所致
6 后面还有腼腆写成缅甸的,颇写成频的
[ 本帖最后由 天狗大爷 于 2012-1-9 14:33 编辑 ]
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发表于 2024-5-25 06:59:36 | 只看该作者
捉两只虫
名版——名牌
蓝球——篮球
妙语呻(吟)
[ 本帖最后由 cospa 于 2012-2-21 16:21 编辑 ]
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发表于 2024-5-25 07:00:22 | 只看该作者
脏话连篇啊 应该多点其他的话 或多点情节
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发表于 2024-5-25 07:01:03 | 只看该作者
情节不错,值得欣赏
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