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【武林艳史别记】(8)

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 楼主| 发表于 2024-5-27 18:30:28 | 只看该作者
知琴、知棋、知书、知画?哈哈哈,楼主想必也很佩服琼瑶阿姨的功力吧,竟然直接从《还珠3》里拽出陈家四女给你客串丫鬟,佩服佩服!这知画可不就是五阿哥的小妾么?她还怀了五阿哥的种呢。呵呵,开个玩笑,楼主不要误会,兄弟觉悟取笑之意,用了就用了,无伤大雅。
琼瑶阿姨的书虽然令我等男儿肉麻,但她至少有两样本事我是十分佩服的:一是歌词创作,细腻婉约、优美动人,琼瑶阿姨的词相当见功夫;另一个就是给人物起名字了,她的书中正反主次、三教九流,每个角色的名字都起的恰到好处令人过耳不忘,名字不但好听而且人如其名,与角色的性格特点一脉相承。不知这两点楼主以为然否?
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发表于 2024-5-27 18:31:18 | 只看该作者
楼上的这位兄弟,你是我发这部小说以来见过最认真的回复者,先致以崇高敬意!
其实我还真没想过四个丫鬟的名字竟然跟琼瑶阿姨的创意重合了,不过错打错着,既然如此巧合,那就让她们继续发挥作用,博君一笑吧~
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 楼主| 发表于 2024-5-27 18:31:57 | 只看该作者
惭愧惭愧,俺看你的书这许久,好像还是第一次回复。我这人比较懒,平时回复不多,但既然回复了就好好回复嘛,俺一向认为一次用心的回复比一百次灌水有意义的多。
顺便问一句,你这书会不会继续下去啊?俺看你好久没开张了,还等着你下回把小燕子啥的也拽进来客串一把呢,那多有意思啊!
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发表于 2024-5-27 18:32:35 | 只看该作者
还好我以前看过改写版本的前文了,确实比原版还好看,关键是公主没被人轮奸,但是还是需要云平去解救他,再把他母亲和姨妈也上了那才是最好的结果
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 楼主| 发表于 2024-5-27 18:33:27 | 只看该作者
从此文可以看出作者有一定的文学功底,人物刻画比较丰满,肉戏描写使读者如浴春风,强烈期待下文!
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发表于 2024-5-27 18:34:08 | 只看该作者
文章不错,就是很久没有更新了。一直期待楼主发表新文。加油,支持。
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发表于 2024-5-27 18:34:54 | 只看该作者
想到花解语捧着吴朔那JJ口交,我就兴奋
哈哈,太爽了、It is very rarely to read such wonderful adult Wu Shei story in recent days.
It is true there are lots of such type of adult stories flooding the market or most of the websites, but unfortunately not so many writers deserve our highest recommendations of 5 stars. (I use the number of stars to show the position of international hotels. 5 Stars are ranked as Number 1)
I am not flattering the writer when I have ranked him as a novelist with 5 stars. Though I have not read the other chapters of this wonderful amended story, just by reading Chapter 8 has already given us a very great sense of surprisingly happiness. Now, finally we have another author who has a strong shadow of our greatest Wu Shei writings - Jin Yong.
The very opening paragraphs have already attracted all the readers' attentions. There is a quotation of a very famous poet''s poem as the starting point of this chapter. Then what follows are a detail description and presenting of the meanings in the poem together with the writer's personal appreciations of the beauties embrassed by the amazing, peaceful and beautiful surroundings.
All the descriptions are so wonderful that they simply remind us our fantastic novelist - Jin Yong. Very similar to Jin Yong, the writer has presented to the readers a very beautiful picture of the famous scenery of the place in China which is still a wonderful place for to-day's tourists.
This is made possible only by the writer's very high proficiency in Chinese Literature. Unlike the other novelists who like to start their stories with very few descriptions of the background of the story but are fillled with immediate presentations of lots of sex scenes and acts, this writer has successfully given us a very peaceful and calm opening to such an extent that it seems we are enjoying the beautiful scenery with breeze blowing in the same way as the writer's main character.
Such a success of making the readers to indulge in such a heavenly beauty is made possible only by this writer's excellent knowledge in Chinese literacy. For this point we give this writer a Distinction.
The characterizations of the main characters are very impressive indeed. The techniques and choice of dictions are so impressive that we can immediately form pictures of what these characters look like. Such skills can also be seen in Jin Yong's novels, especially in his descriptions of his main male and female characters such as Guo Jing, Yang Guo,Huang Rong and Xiao Long Nu. This is the reason why I have said that this writer can be compared to our greatest novelist, Jin Yong.
In a good novel, what the readers demand are a good plot and background, a good theme, a detailed description of the major characters and an use of high Chinese literary words. All these have been presented by the writer to the readers. We are given the impressions that the main male character is so handsome that he is very much liked and loved by many female sex and the female character is very beautiful but a bit wanton. All their characteristics are detailly described. We are also told that they are rich so they can enjoy their lives luxuriosly such as dressing first class clothings and hiring top class ships. Once again, the writer is marvellous to use his high command of Chinese words to give us all such pictures.
Then all a sudden, there is a dramatic change of atmosphere from peace to the coming possible bloodshed, killing or slaugtery. While this young couple is enjoying their sweet dreams of romance, they have overheard there is a possible attack to the base of the female character. This leads to an unwilling suddenly departure of this young couple. The writer once again is very successful in detailing the inward feelings of their sadness of separating.
There are not too many sex descriptions in the chapter, as what the writer has said previously. Yet from a few implications of the descriptions of the sexy bodies of the female character, her temptations to play the young man's sex organ and the later appearances of his mother and aunt whom look to him very sexy as well. All these have told us that though there not so much have been talked about sex acts, we can expect some more are coming not only very explicit descriptions of sex acts, but also some very abnormal sex relationships as well, that is adulteries.
All in all, this is a wonderful writer of adult Wu Shing novels who can rank next to our internationally well known novelist - Jin Yong.
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发表于 2024-5-27 18:35:43 | 只看该作者
谢谢作者的改编
云平的母亲和姨妈终于现身了
喜欢看乱伦的内容
原来看过云平和姨妈搞的内容
不过那个没有作者的文笔功底
通篇就是啊,大鸡巴什么的
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发表于 2024-5-27 18:36:18 | 只看该作者
还是一样的好看,和原著一样的强大。非常喜欢楼主写的,看了几遍,还是很有感觉的。希望楼主多多的加油,多多的更新,支持楼主!
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发表于 2024-5-27 18:36:56 | 只看该作者
文章不错,作者也不错,但是无色啊。情色情色,就希望更加色一点。
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